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Hyde without a Jekyll

Hyde without a Jekyll

@kcolled 3 years ago

(So this is my first Oc here…I’ve played in RPGs before but I apologies in advance if I do something wrong. I’m not an experienced role player and I would be grateful for any help or advice that you could give.)

In the previous weeks some strange advents have happened around the society. While this was not unusual for the group of rouge scientists for there to be some oddities surrounding them, but these events that I speak of weren’t that of the accidental portal opening on the Solstice, the strange behavior or Dr. Helen Jekyll, and the arrival of new comers. These events were smaller, unnoticeable at first, but none the less strange. In the previous year the scientists have all experienced at one point or another feel of being watched though they just blamed it on one another. These feelings have increased to the point of becoming a part of the society experience. In the previous month odder things still have occurred. Items around the society began disappearing. Nothing that was critical but things that were noticed over time. Among the list of missing items are: Blankets, food, rocks, many curtains, paper, broken tools, and 52 Lids. While some items disappeared other began to appear. Some of the broken tools came backed fixed, needed ingredients would appear in beds, wanted items would be found stuck to the ceilings. While this was happily unquestioned by the scientists other odd items would appear that they would not need nor desire. For instance small dead animals would be found outside bedroom doors, jars of blood were discovered lining window sills, and most notably four days ago a box was found sitting in the main hall containing 13 eyeballs 68 teeth most of which were not human.

It was a hot summer night in July though most of the lodgers were able to beat the heat and fall asleep. At around 2 in the morning a small tapping started at the main doors. The tapping grew louder and louder becoming a knocking and then a pounding. The pounding continued to grow until a single large slam shook the doors and echoed through the halls followed by deathly silence.

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Mz.Hyde Mod • 3 years ago • edited

* Mz. Hyde, who like many Hydes, just happened to be up in the wee hours of the morning.*

I'M COMING! I'M COMING! GAWD!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* After that last slam the door falls silent and no sound can be heard. Though if you were to look out the windows you would notice it begin unusually dark outside for living in the middle of London.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* Looks outside.*

Hmmmm.... something's not right with this picture.

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No, not that....

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

(lol that's great! XD )

* As you step though the main doors (I'm assuming your going through the main doors) you notice that all the lights surround and on the society have been extinguished. While the street lamps around the other buildings and other building lights are lit they don't provide enough light to see clearly.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Hmmmmmm...what a strange anomaly... it's almost like something's draining the energy...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* out of the corner of your eye you see a slight movement behind the far pillar*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* Continues watching the pillar.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* You don't see the movement again however as your eyes adjust you notice that the very bottom of the pillar is not it's usual shape. *

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Oh my god...that pillar looks like a penis!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

(Not expecting that...*is now very red and flustered* >///< )

* As your eyes adjust you notice the pillar is oddly shaped do to something or someone behind it. When you exclaim your comment the someone jumps and you hear the sound of them falling off the porch into the shrubs blow, very ungracefully.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( That's what happens when you deal with an Aegosexual!)

Wow, talk about a bad case of erectile dysfunction!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

(>///< *flustered laughter* Leave it to an Asexual Aromatics forget these kinds of responses when planning stories.)

* more shrub rustling* (Not in the sexual way more like the figure is trying to stand up or crawl out of the bushes but failing miserably.)

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(Ace five!)

* Slowly inches closer to the bush, her hand on her needle on her lapel.*

Hello?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

(Woot! *high fives*)

* As you near the bush you see a small figure curled up under the foliage. The figure is shaking slightly but freezes when it hears you voice.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* Stops and stares at it, not really knowing what to do.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* After a minute of silence the figure's head turns slowly to see if your still there. While the foliage makes it hard to see the person but two circular glints tell you that they're wearing goggles. They're head turns and they lock eyes with you and then freezes again.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* Keeps staring at the figure.*

....Hi?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* figure does not respond but begins shaking slightly. You also notice that it's clutching a worn satchel.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Are you okay?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* the figure looks down begins to stand up* Th-This was a mistake coming here. I should just leave. *as the person puts weight on their foot they collapse back down inhaling sharply.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Hey! Take it easy!

* She goes over to the person.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* sudden fear fills their voice* NO! Stay-- *the figure shakes takes a few breaths and then continues in a slightly calmer voice* No. I'm Ok really! *the figure crawls to the corner away from you and then shakily stands leaning against the porch for support. *

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Look, I know I'm a scary-looking person and that's the public image I want to keep, but I'm actually a very nice person!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure struggles up onto the porch and then into a standing position using the pillar for support. You can't make out the clothes in detail but you can see that they're wearing a worn suit clearly too big for them; there face is covered using a large scarf, goggles, and a top hat; and the satchel is tightly gripped in one of their hands at all times. While you can't see their face you can tell that they're confused by your statement.* Th-That's not it. I just thought-- no nevermind. It-- I should go now. *The figure begins limping towards the stairs making sure to give you a wide gap.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Wait! You're hurt!

* She walks over to her.*

We have an infirmary in there, we can check to make sure you're okay!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

No! No! I'm fine! *begins backing away but then trips and falls down with a solid thud*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* Winces at the thud.*

Oooo! That hurt!~ 😫

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

AGH!! *The figure, now sitting, screams out in frustration. They rip off the satchel and chuck it at the ground next to them* THIS WAS A MISTAKE!! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT I THOUGHT COMING HERE WOULD HELP ME SEE-- *The yelling suddenly stops. The figures head turns to the satchel laying on the ground. A few seconds go by as they realizes what they've done. Hurriedly they scoop up the bag in their arms cradling it. Rocking back and forth small sobs can be heard coming from the figure along with the muttering of 'I'm sorry!'*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

No no! You're fine!

* She sighs.*

Look, I know it can be really hard to trust people... I'm like that too! I didn't exactly trust Dr. Jekyll when I first came here...but I know that I don't want to go where I would've ended up without him...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* As you speak the figure continues to mutter 'I'm so sorry.' Into the satchel. When you finish the figure looks up at you, still clutching the bag and in a shaky voice says* S-So is it... *The figure looks around and the drops its voice down to a whisper you can barely hear.* ...is it safe here?

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Yes.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure relaxes for the first time and once again begins to stand*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Are you hurt?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

I've had worse. *The figure reaches into the satchel and pulls out a long, dirtied walking stick that was much to large to have fit inside the satchel. The figure begins to follow Mz. Hyde to the main doors but stops before an area of the porch lit by the light spilling out of the door.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

What's wrong?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure looks between you and the lit floor and then pokes it with the walking stick tentatively* It's just...nothing good happens in the light...*seeing that the light didn't eat you or the walking stick the stranger very slowly puts the tip of their boot into the lit area.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Here.

* She holds her hand out to the stranger.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* With the cane in one hand and the satchel in the other (It's strapped around their chest but they are not letting go of it...ever.) The stranger eyes the hand unsure of what to do. After a moment of contemplation the figure steps completely into the light and on the door side of the hand and allows Mz. Hyde to guide them inside.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Welcome to the Society for the Arcane Sciences!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* A small gasp comes from the figure as they enter the main hall.* I-I've been in here before...but this-- this is the first I'm really seeing it. Maybe not all things in the light are bad.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Oh? You've been in here before? Why have I never seen you before?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* Still staring at the society*

Because I didn't want you to see me. It makes it easier to tell where your allances lay if you don't know I'm watching.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

That's a good idea.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* Still awestruck by the scene before them they mutter a reply* T-Thanks

* Now seeing the figure in the light Mz. Hyde notices that their suit is covered in holes, patches, rips, mud, stains, and dried blood.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Aren't you cold?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

No... If anything I'm a little warm. *The figure begins to pull off her hat, gloves, and scarf and stuffs them into her satchel not caring if they're damaged. She also places the goggles on top of her head. You can now see her face and tell that the figure is a girl. The girl has long dirty blond hair with a few streaks of blond and brown running throughout. Her hair is kept back in a pony tail and matted with blood and dirt, though there are many shorter strands that hang wildly in front. She has a thin build and something about her seems deformed though it's impossible to tell what. The eyes however are the most striking of all. The left eye is burnt orange and appears to be dead. One may even make the mistake of thinking it was glass due to the lack of life behind it but the pupal dilates. The right is a bright shocking blue that seems to hold great terror behind it.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

So, what's your name?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* The girl stops and turns toward Mz. Hyde confusion crossing her face. She then looks down at her hand opening and closing them.* um...well...this has never happened. No one's asked me that before.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Ask you your name?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* She nods*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Huh.... I can relate to that...so what is it?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* Her confusion deepens.* Well...I guess... This body is named *she pauses for a moment as a flash of sadness crosses her face and the name is uttered with quiet emotions.* ...Allison.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

That's a nice name, but I want YOUR name, not your body's name.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* Her face drops and she thinks some more.* Well...I-I'm not really sure on that.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

You're not sure what your name is?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* She nods her head slowly. It seems like her hair is becoming darker and more brown or has it always been like that? * I think it's Allison but I don't think I'm Allison. And if I'm not Allison then where is she? When is she coming back?... And who am I?

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Whoever you want to be.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

...But...But I don't want to be. ... I want... I want Allison to come back. *The girl's blue eye fills with sadness and threatens tears. She reaches into her satchel and pulls out a small picture frame. She stares at it longingly.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* Mz. Hyde puts her hands on the girl's shoulders.*

Listen, I know that it's really scary... until five years ago, I shared a body with another person.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

T-today makes makes 4 years she's been gone. Today makes 4 years of my...existance. I've tried everything to bring her back. Am I doing something wrong? Is there something I'm missing? *she looks up at you tears spilling over on her blue eye. Her next question is in that of a whisper.* D-did they kill her?

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Who?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The sadness and color drain from her face and the tears stop as they're replaced by pure terror and the girl begins to tremble. Even the orange eye shows the slightest hint of fear. You can barely hear the next words she whispers.* The Men with Silver Feathers.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* Though she's good at hiding it, Mz. Hyde is shocked at her answer.*

W-who are they?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* She struggles to get the words out as the paralyzing fear takes over.* I-I don't know! I d-don't know why they came, or who they are, or w-what they wanted! They just destroyed everything--everyone around me--her. And then they try to destroy you too. T-then they leave. A-and your sitting in a pile of ashes and and b-blood and p-pain a-and confusion!

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

T-that sounds like...LIKE HER!

* Unknowingly to "Alison" snippets of her horrifying past run through her mind. With the sound of her torturer's laughter ringing through her ears. She begins hyperventilating.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The girl didn't know who 'Her' was but if she was anything like The Silver Feather Men Mz. Hyde would need something to protect her self. The girl reaches into her satchel and pulls out a large blood stained kitchen knife and lays it at Mz. Hyde's feet. She then scampers under a table in a dark corner. She sits there shaking, clutching the picture of Allison, and whispering 'I'm so sorry.' while her own memories of fire and silver feathers engulf her.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( Um, that was actually supposed to be a thought, but okay!)

* Mz. Hyde comes out of her flashback, and notices the knife at her feet. She gives it back to"Allison".*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

(Oops. Sorry.)

* The girl doesn't even see Mz. Hyde. All she can see is the silver feather men standing over her laughing while they light all of Allison's work on fire.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Hey.

* She slides the knife under the table.*

I think you dropped this.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The sound of the knife scraping against the floor jolts the girl out of her mental prison. She gasps for air trying to settle herself, the smell of smoke lingering in her nose. She sees the knife laying on the floor and quickly picks it up and shoves it into her bag. The girl looks up at Mz. Hyde her blue eye now tinted red from emotion.* A-Are *sniff* Are the bad people going to come h-here?

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

No. The bad people are not coming here...not if I can help it. Is that why you were pounding on the door? Are you being chased?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* Tears of relief now flood her blue eye.* N-no. I-I knocked cause I wanted help...bringing Allison back. B-but then I got scared and ran...

It's been so long since she's been here...I'm losing hope that's she's still a-alive...I-I've watched you people for so long now... You do the impossible every day! I-If there's any hope of finding her....It's here...with you guys.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* She smiles at the stranger.*

Follow me.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

(I'm so sorry I haven't replied sooner! I think I missed this! :P )

Ok...*The girl climbs out from under the table and stands up, a small smile tugging at her lips.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(That's okay!)

* Mz. Hyde leads her into the kitchen.*

Are you hungry?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

N-- Actually yes. I'm starving!

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* She opens the giant industrial fridge.*

I think we have some leftovers... let's see... there's the lobster ravioli from last night...the chicken from two nights ago...the shrimp scampi from lunch...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The girl looks at the fridge in awe.* Wow! How do you get enough ice yo keep this thing cool! *The girl begins to pull food stuffs out of the fridge, placing some into her satchel and others into her arms. By the time she's done all the left overs are gone and are either in her satchel or her arms.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

You do know we have a table, right?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* The girl looks at Mz. Hyde with a confused and worried look on her face, then at the floor as though debating on weither or not to sit down and start eating in the middle of the kitchen, and then back at Mz. Hyde for an answer.* Can we use it?

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Well, yeah... that's why it's called a "dining" table!

* She leads through another door into the dining room, complete with a dining table that can seat 50.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* The girl is even more in awe by the table or by the fact that she can sit at it.* ...Can we eat here?

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Well, yeah! That's what we have chairs for!~

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The girl grabs a seat and begins eating all the food in her arms as fast as she can. It's not the prettiest of sights and she guards the remaining food with her arms. (Think prison eating habits.) She stops, looks up at Mz. Hyde, and swallows.* Sorry.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

It's okay. You just eat.

* Mz. Hyde goes back into the kitchen and returns eating a brownie.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* When Mz. Hyde returns about half of the food is gone. The girl looks up at her.* Thank you. Thank you for the food, for inviting me in, for well...everything.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Oh it's no problem! We have plenty of space! Come on, I'll show you to your room.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

Room? *The girl stands up and the rest of the food is gone.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

You said you didn't have a place to stay, right?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

Well...do abandon buildings count?

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

No...well, yes.... but it's not exactly healthy, ya know?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure nods and looks down at the floor.* I guess it would be nice not to move every few days when someone finds me camping out in there.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Well, you're in luck! We have plenty of room!

* She leads Allison up the foyer stairs, down the hall and makes a right turn.*

I think this one's still empty.

* She knocks the door and nobody answers. She opens the door to reveal a furnished, but unoccupied room, complete with a bed, a closet, a dresser, and a desk with a chair.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* The girl stares at the room mouth agape.* Th-This is mine?

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Yep. Dr. Henry Jekyll told all of us that if we ever found a fellow scientist in need, we help them out. And, lucky for you, I just so happen to be a night manager of this place, so I have the power to invite you to come live with us. Unless Jekyll tells me not to...but I don't think he'll say no he's too nice. Though I personally speculate that's just a cover to hide the fact that he makes crystal meth, but that's not important right now.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

T-Thank you! *Tears of joy stream from her blue eye and the girl runs over to Mz. Hyde and hugs her.* No one has ever done something like this for me before!

(Lol crystal meth XD )

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* She smiles a little.*

You're welcome.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

* The girl pulls away and starts walking around the room, taking it all in.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

I'll leave you alone to get settled. Oh! By the way, the key to this room is in the top dresser drawer.

* She starts to head out the door.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

Thank you! *When the doors click closed the girl sits down on the edge of her bed and pulls out the picture of Allison. She looks at the frame for a long time until the sun begins to peak through the window. She gets up, closes the curtains, and climbs into her new bed. The girl then carefully places the picture on the desk next to her bed, and before She turns off the light, whispers to the picture.* I think we're finally safe Allison.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(I think that's a wrap!)

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Hastie Lanyon • 3 years ago

(I know I canonically probably don't sleep at the Society but let's say I had a late one and am too drunk to walk back home. I commandeered a guest room of sorts.)

* Hastie woke with a start at the sudden noise coming from further down the hallway. Still slightly drunk, it took him a few moments to process the unusual sound. Was it a lodger? A burglar? A Hyde? Deciding to go investigate, he got up from the bed and stumbled towards the door.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Hastie Lanyon • 3 years ago • edited

(sounds good to me! XD )

* No sound further sound comes from the door though it appears to be unusually dark outside for no light falls through the windows, except that of moon light.*

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Hastie Lanyon  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* He opened the door and looked into the hallway, but everyhing seemed quiet. Not paying mind to his rumpled clothing and bare feet, Hastie walked through the hallway, looking for what might be the source of the ruckus.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Hastie Lanyon • 3 years ago • edited

* Hastie gets the strange feeling of someone watching him but this easily could be the remains of a dream. He seems to remember the sound coming from what sounded like the main doors.*

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hastie Lanyon • 3 years ago

(A burglar? A murderer? A burglar-murderer?)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

( [rofl! XD] No worse! It's the proletariat finally come to claim him!)

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Hastie Lanyon  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(Please don't let it be the proletariat. Now is really not the time.)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Hastie Lanyon • 3 years ago

(lol When is it a good time for the proletariat, Hastie?)

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Hastie Lanyon  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

(A burrahobbit?)

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Catt Hatter  Hastie Lanyon • 3 years ago

(LotR For the win! [technically the Hobbit, but meh. same world])

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Hastie Lanyon • 3 years ago

( LOL.)

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Mysterious Gamer • 3 years ago

who's doing all that noise! i'm trying to sleep! (meh, i don't sleep really xD i'm technically a ghost, so..)

oh! a new roleplayer! i have to present myself in a very ghostly way! (yeah i know you were here since a time, but velius didn't knew of your existence!)

* starts making ghostly sounds and hopes that the new roleplayer hears them*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mysterious Gamer • 3 years ago

(don't worry I totally understand in character and Out of character things. :D )

* Nothing really happens but you begin to get the feeling of being watched.*

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Mysterious Gamer  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

velius says: um.. who's there? i can scare you! not that i'm scared or something like that!

* disappears in the middle of the air for defend himself and continues making ghostly sounds*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mysterious Gamer • 3 years ago

* When you disappear you notice a slight movement at the window. Though it could be a tree moving in the wind.*

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Mysterious Gamer  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

maybe it's just the wind.. yeah is that.. *velius stops making ghostly sounds and decides to investigate the room*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mysterious Gamer • 3 years ago

* Nothing in the room seems to have changed but you notice that there's a lack of lamp light coming from you window.*

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Mysterious Gamer  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

where are you? um? there's a lamp turned on! *velius goes to there and watches it*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mysterious Gamer • 3 years ago

* When you look out the window all of the lamps around and on the Society have been turned off. As your eyes adjust to the darkness you see a figure standing across the street from the Society.*

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Mysterious Gamer  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

who is there? *velius watches through the window and stares at that figure*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Mysterious Gamer • 3 years ago

* The figure doesn't hear you probably due to the closed window and the distance. In fact they don't seem to notice you at all. As you eyes adjust you see that they're staring at something in their hands.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Dreamer bolted awake a unpleasant mood settling about her. "I swear to god that if they don't know the time and if that they don't stop it i will skewer them" Dreamer snarled removing the paper thin sheet she was wrapped in. She opened her door quietly and shut it and then ran toward the door in a bitter mood. "And if its another bloody ghost i don't care what i'm hopping dimensions!" She whispered yelled to herself as she summoned her double bladed sword and opened the door to see who was there.

(Welcome to the roleplaying! Welcome to the madness as well i hope you enjoy the craziness we have to offer in the roleplaying side of things and i'm glad you are not apart of the recipe for disaster)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago • edited

* Staring out into London at night she notices something odd. All the street lamps surrounding the Society are dark as well as the sconces on the society's entrance. It'll take her eyes a minute to adjust to the darkness.*

(Thank you! I'm really excited to do this since I love roleplaying but I don't get to do it much! I'll try not to be part of the recipe for disaster but no promises that I'll get sucked in from time to time. ;) )

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

Dreamer growled getting annoyed. She yawned still craving sleep as she glanced around waiting for her eyes to adjust. "If its a Hyde i'm gonna kill 'em" She said sword ready.

(You're welcome! Eh it's fine it happens to all of us)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* As her eyes adjust she notices that there was something unusual about the far pillar. As though something or someone was behind it.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Show yourself before i drag you out here" Dreamer called taking a step toward it.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The thing doesn't move.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Dreamer walked up to the pole and walked around it to face the person or thing.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* Dreamer cannot see the figure clearly due to the dark however she can make out a bit of the person. The figure is dressed in a ragged suit clearly to big for it with a satchel in it's lap. It's nose and mouth are covered up my a scarf while it's eyes are hidden behind reflective goggles. On top of it's head is a top hat that is also to large for it. When you come around the pillar you see the figure is staring at something in their hand. A piece of paper maybe or a thin box. At first the person doesn't notice you until you are mere foot away from them staring intently. They quickly look up and shove what ever they were looking at into the satchel.* um... Oh no.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(I'm so sorry! I didn't see your reply! Must of been the day my notifications was acting up)

Dreamer quickly had the figure pinned to the ground. "Okay i swear to god interrupt my sleep again and i will kill you" She said growling sounding like a big cat, a side effect from the spell.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago • edited

(Don't worry about! I'm probably going to need to do a part 2 of this so all the other RPs can conclude as well.)

* The figure begins to laugh.* Well this is an interesting situation!

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"You sound like a Hyde" Dreamer said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure stops lauging.* What's a 'Hyde'? Oh you mean that family that many of the lodgers are from!

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Okay so scratch that off the list, but you still piss me off like one does" Dreamer said her brown eyes glaring down at the figure.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Wow! The entire family pisses you off?!? What did they ever do to you? Or is it one of those long standing family feud sort of things?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"That is none of your concern" Dreamer said. "Why are you here and making such ungodly loud noises at this ungodly hour?" She asked.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Do you have a problem with this time too?? You seem to have a lot of anger in you. If you must know, I was knocking on your door for help but then I changed my mind.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"I am only this angry when people wake me up so early" Dreamer said. "Or just wake me up in general. What did you need help with?"

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Well I don't want your help now, especially when you have an attitude like that!

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Not my fault, you caused it" Dreamer said.

"Dreamer? What are you doing up?" Nex Hyde said walking up to the two.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure looks up at Nex.* Oh! Hello there! I could use some help. Your friend here, has so rudely pinned me to the ground and is now complaining In my ear about the Hyde family and the time.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"She does that." Nex said. "You probably did deserve being pinned though." She shrugged as she walked up and gent over so she was looking down at the figure. "Even i know not to wake her up and i adore messing with people"

"Messing? You torture" Dreamer corrected.

"Details, details. Who needs em?" Nex said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure stares up at Nex through tinted goggles.* Well it wasn't my intention to wake anyone up, if that's any consolation. I was hoping someone already awake would hear my knocking, but when nobody came I knocked louder until you two showed up.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Ah. Why did you need any of us? We aren't the wisest choice" Nex said.

Dreamer glared at her and sighed getting up. "I need coffee" She said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure sits up, stretching.* That may be true but you are certainly the safest choice. However that no longer matters for I'm going back to my shadows, as attempting to enlist your help was a mistake. *The figure begins to stand.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Nex wraps her arm around the figure tightly. "Now your gonna explain yourself. Come now i don't bite" She said smiling playfully.

Dreamer face palmed. "Nex, usual?" Dreamer asked going to the society. She nodded as she then turned her attention back to the figure.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure doesn't struggle and even seems to be enjoying this.* Well this is an eventfull night! First being tackled by Dreamer Jekyll and then hugged by Nex Hyde! Though I guess I should answer your questions, it's the least I can do after waking you guys up.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Excellent!" Nex cooed. "How do you know my name? Who are you? Why did you need our help?"

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Wow! That's a lot of questions! Let's see here...I know your names because you both called eachother them, that and I've been watching you--no the Society for about a year now. And as for your second question, this is gonna be tricky to explain, that's what I need your help on.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Try me and woah, woah, woah. For one thing, i didn't say that i was a Hyde, second you've been watching us?!" New called shocked.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago • edited

Hm..Are you sure cause Nex Hyde just rolls off ones tongue nicely? Now I'll be happy to answer more of your questions but first could you please let go of me? *The figure looks down at Nex's arms still wrapped around them.* Or you could carry me in, that works too, I would just like to make myself a spot of tea to wet my vocal cords before we continue.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Yes i'm sure" Nex said. "I'll carry you. I don't trust you enough to let you be on your own" She said maneuvering the figure so they would ride on her back. Nex held her legs and sighed. "Don't get used to this. Now where to?"

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Wow! I feel so special almost like the queen of england! *The figure got comfortable on nex and began to think.* hm...I'm not really sure...how about where ever you feel most comfortable and safe?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Alright" Nex said smiling as she took her in to the society and in to her and Dreamer's room. "Dreamer is out getting coffee"

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

I heard her mention something about that. *The figure climbs off of Nex's back and sits on the floor. The figure then pulls out a dirty mug, a flask, and some tea leaves out of their stachel.* So I'm not entirly sure how to start our conversation so I'll let you ask some questions and I'll answer them as best as I can. Sound good?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Yeah. Why did you need the society's help?" Nex said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Well...I've got this problem that I haven't been able to solve for the last 3--no today makes 4 years, and the society are the only people I can trust, who may be able to solve it.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"What's the problem?" Nex asked smiling.

Dreamer entered looking in much better spirits. "That's a good cup of coffee" She said smiling.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure grew silent, a heavyness filled the room as they poured water from the flask and into the mug. When they finished adding the leaves to steep, they began to speak again only all the playfullness in their voice had left.* I need you to help me find someone. *The figure pulled out a picture frame containing the image of a girl in a simple dress with long, straight, light blond hair. She has Orange, caring eyes and a sweet smile. * Her name is... *The figure paused and the name she said was filled with quiet emotions of sadness and longing.* ...Allison

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"What's so important about this Allison? Look compassion is not really in my DNA" Nex said.

"It's true" Dreamer said drinking her coffee.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure watches the tea steep.* Well...if I can find her then maybe things will go back to the way they were, the way they should be.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"And what way is that?" Nex asked.

"Look once something happens it can never go back to the way things where. I should know" Dreamer said looking away.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure grows angry at Dreamer's comment.* IT HAS TO GO BACK!! *After a moment of silence the figure calms down and continues.* She has to come back...because maybe then...maybe then I'll stop existing.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Dreamer looked up shocked and even Nex did. "This sounds like that one dimension with the Nobodies" Nex said.

"What do you mean?" Dreamer asked.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

I...I...*The figure hesitates to tell Dreamer and just looks at the over brewed tea.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"YOu can tell me." Dreamer said kneeling down and sitting in front of the figure. "I want to help"

Nex watched by looking down on the figure.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure begins to tremble.* I shouldn't be here. She should be here. I don't know where she is. I can't find her. I can't be here. *The figure begins to stand up, preparing to bolt.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Dreamer grabs the figure. "calm down everything is okay"

"hey. Look I know how it feels to not exist, to not suppose to be. Just calm down and explain" Nex said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure begins to painic, struggling in Dreamers arms.* I have to go! I have to find her! I have to find her before they do! Before they try to kill her again!

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"we will help you if you just explain" Dreamer promises.

Nex stood in the doorway now.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The girl is thrashing about in Dreamers arms now. Her voice becoming more and more filled with panic.* I've got to find her before the Silver Feather Men!

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"nex go" dreamer said. Nex smiled running out of the room. "come on" dreamer said leading her outside clutching the figures wrist.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

...Silver Feather Men...*The figure goes limp from fear body trembling, and collapses to the floor, pulling their knees to their chest.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Dreamer was shocked. "do you need to see Dr. Jekyll?"

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure doesn't seem to hear you they only keep muttering.* No Silver Feather Men. No Silver Feather Men. No Silver Feather Men.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Dreamer sighed unsure how to deal with this.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* After a few minutes the figure begins to calm down, clutching their satchel close to their chest. They're no longer muttering and shaking but they aren't talking either.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Dreamer sighed shaking her head.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure slowly moves their head to look up at her.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"look"dreamer said. "I'm not sure what all of this is about but let me help you" she said summoning her weapon.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure cowers away from the weapon and prepares to run.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"come on lets safe this Allison" dreamer said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure relaxes.* Really?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"why I summoned this" dreamer said holding up the double bladed sword.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The figure stands and smiles at Dreamer.* Thank you!

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"nex is out looking now" Dreamer says smiling. "lets go"

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Out looking?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"for Allison" dreamer said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Allison's not out there. *The figure gestures towards London.* I don't know where she is but she's not out there.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"then where is she?" Dreamer asked.

Nex walked in. "couldn't find the guy"

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago • edited

I don't know but I think...

* The girl, for you can now tell the figure is a girl, removes her top hat and scarf that was covering her face and stuffes them into her satchel. She also placed her reflective goggles onto her head so you could now see her entire face not just a person buried beneath a much to large dirty, torn, and bloodied suit. The girl has long dirty blond hair with a few streaks of blond and brown running throughout. Her hair is kept back in a pony tail and matted with blood and dirt, though there are many shorter strands that hang wildly in front. She has a thin build, and angular face. The eyes however are the most striking of all. The left eye is burnt orange and appears to be dead. One may even make the mistake of thinking it was glass due to the lack of life behind it but the pupal dilates. The right is a bright shocking blue that seems to hold great terror. She seems strangely similar to the woman in the photograph as though they could be siblings but something isn't right about her though it's impossible to tell what.*

...I think she's somewhere inside me.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"this just turned wierd" nex said and dreamed nodded

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago • edited

* The girl nodded.* I tried so many things to make sense of it, to bring her back but none of them worked! I finished Allison's work, I recreated that serum, and I waited for so long!! Why doesn't she come back...why won't I stop existing?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"okay this is right up our alley" Nex said.

"nex Hyde use tp be inside my head and made with a formula" dreamer said.

"once your there you never stop existing" nex said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago • edited

I knew your last name was Hyde! I don't think I--Wait you know what this is? *The figure reaches into her satchel and pulls out a old worn piece of paper, bits of it are missing and most of it is burned and covered in dirt and blood but three legible messages stands out. At the top in neat hand writing is written 'A New Start for a New World'. Over top of the entire page is written in blotted hurried ink 'NEVER TO BE USED UNLESS YOU WISH TO PROVOKE EVIL HIMSELF!' and underneath all of that is scrawled 'HJ7'*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"YES!" Dreamer yelled reading it. "that is the formula that was used on me!"

Nex nodded. "that's how a Hyde is made, which is you"

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Hold on! Hold on! First you tell me Hyde isn't a family, and some how I'm a part of it. So then What is a Hyde? How does this recipe that Allison found in the street make people? And what am I?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"hyde's are beings created by the formula. We are the products of that formula. You are made from the evil of Allison's mind" Nex said and dreamer nodded.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The girl grows quiet for a minute.* ...I don't feel evil...

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"well not all hides are evil" dreamer said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The girl thinks about this new information for a long time before saying.* This is still very strange but it does line up with a couple things. But how are you two separated and I'm not? Where did Allison go? Why haven't I seen her in 4 years? And how do you two look very different while Allison and I...not so much?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"long story, involving a dimensional trip, a sorcerer, and a war" dreamer said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The girl now looks more confused than ever.* Do I have to do all of that to get Allison back?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"Depends." Dreamer said.

Nex nodded. "We were a special circumstance"

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The girl frowns* Oh. Well do you know how to get Allison back?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"I don't" Nex said.

"I know someone who can help but she is unpredictable" Dreamer said.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The girl looks from Nex to Dreamer.* Please! I'm desperate!

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"I'm not sure" Dreamer said.

Nex sighed.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago • edited

* The girl slumped onto the floor in defeat.* Never mind. I'll figure it out on my own, though I do have to say with all this new information you gave me, I now know what I am at least.

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"everyone calls her Mz. Hyde" dreamer said.

Nex nodded.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

* The girl looks up in confusion trying to place the name.* Mz. Hyde? *Recognition lights up her face as she remembers who Mz. Hyde is.* Mz. Hyde! The night manager! But do you really think she could help me?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

"yeah, she like us separated from her Jekyll" nex said.

Dreamer nodded.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

So she knows about these sorts of things then. And you really think she could help me--us?

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Dreamer and Nex nodded vigorously.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Ok then...lead the way! *The stands up with new hope filling her.*

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

""she usually just appears wherever" dreamer said.

Nex nodded. "come on @Mz.Hyde

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Should we go looking for @Mz. Hyde so our yelling doesn't wake the other lodgers?

(if she doesn't show up before this discussion ends we can just grab her on the part 2)

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(yeah)

Nex shrugged. "she'll show eventually"

Dreamed agreed.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Miss-Dreamerkat • 3 years ago

Ok!

(I'm going to leave this here since we're at a good stopping point and we can pick up the storyline tomarrow when I post part 2. Sound ok?)

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Miss-Dreamerkat  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(yep)

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

('Make sense of it' and 'why won't I stop existing' *vanishes in a puff of invited corrections*)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

(*Calls after the puff of correction* Thank You!!)

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(You're welcome!)

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(Um, 'scones' are a type of pastry. I think you meant 'sconces.' X3 )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

(YOU HAVE FAILED ME SPELL CHECK!!! Thank's Catt I'll fix that now! :D )

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(In the computer's defence, "scones" was spelled correctly. Just the wrong word. Are you ok with me jumping in with word things like this? Or would you rather I never did it again? XD )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

(I'm 100% fine with you jumping in! I'm actually a terrible speller and I usually make spell check cry on a daily basis. Sometimes spell check just gives up on me and stops working so I really appreciate all the help I can get! :D )

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Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

( A large hulking figure trudges up the steps to the Society, sopping wet and far too tired to handle the idiosyncrasies of humanity. The hair on the nape of her neck stands on end when she reaches the door, sensing a familiar pair of eyes and her fist tightens around the knob. She pauses before heading inside, deciding not to shake down the threat- for now. She is halfway up the steps when the knocking turns to pounding. She turns on her heel and rips the doors open. Her voice echoes, the husky sound bouncing off the buildings in the square. )

SHOW yourself coward!

( She falters when her demand is met with deafening silence and she shifts uncomfortably. )

I... I know what games you're playing. I'm older and smarter and I'm not afraid of the likes of you! If you don't stand down, then I'll come find you and I'll MAKE you! The rebellion's over. This planet's defended. You. Have. Failed.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* off to the side she notices a figure running for cover. The figure stops after your last declaration and turns.* What are you talking--*It's question is cut short when it sees Jasper for the first time.* uh...*Unsure of who or what Jasper is the figure just stands there staring.*

(My OC doesn't know anything about gems so I apologies for it's ignorance. Me on the other hand love's your character! Go Steven Universe!!!)

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( She stares at the figure in turn, not with a burning intensity, but blankly- perplexed by the creature's uncharacteristic behavior. )

You...uh... know you just broke cover, right?

( no no it's okay, your OC is actually the second person this week that my Jasper had accused of being an enemy spy. She, like the others, was designed for combat so it makes her REEEEAAAALLY uncomfortable when she faces a potential opponent she can't neutralize. The result is a lot of confused scientists who have no idea what she's talking about. )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* the figure continues to stare*

uh... are you a new lodger?

rofl That is amazing!!! XD)

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

.... are you?

( It's probably one of my favorite parts about this character and her interactions with humans. She's paranoid to the point of it being comical when it comes to be behavior she deems "threatening" )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The figure pauses and thinks about this for a moment.*

Well I'm not a lodger but I'm not new around here....but I guess I'm new to the lodgers...oh this is so confusing!

(Well you totally nailed it! I'm laughing my socks off over here! XD )

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

You're telling me!

( And I can assure you this gag will probably carry on for as long as she's here, so say hello to your new comedic relief! )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The figure begins to approach the Gem eyeing her.*

What are you? A Golem? You creator's craftsmanship is exquisite!

(Hooray! :D )

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

My "creator" was an injector and a hole in the ground. A mold must be functional or it is destroyed. ( She pauses awkwardly. )....but...uh... thanks... Are YOU a Golem?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The figure looks down and pauses while thinking of an answer.* Um...no...I don't think so at least. So if You aren't a Golem, What are you because you certainly don't look human?

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( Her large mouth curls up into an amused smirk. )

Take a guess

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The figure sit's down and begins thinking.* You don't look like a werewolf, or a werecat and it's not a full moon so... You might be a vampire! You do have the arrogance of one but your skin isn't bloodless. You seem compentent enough to not be a zombie or machine and you don't have any signs of damage or rot so your probably a living thing and not animated. You yelled something about 'this planet' so...AH HA! You must be a interdimensional being! Though I don't know how you made it though the Inbetween in one piece without any armor or gear.

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( She snarls under her breath at the insult. ) Stay here a little longer and you'll catch on

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure seems to be completely oblivious of the insult they made as well as the anger inside Jasper.* Oh! Is your equipment in your room?

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

What? No. I'm not the warp hopper.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The figure is now very confused.* What?

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Warp Pad?....

...You use it for interplanetary transfer?

.... Nothing?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The figure gets real quite and thinks for a while before saying.* Interplanetary...not interdimensional? Are you an...Alien?

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

You're close. I'm a Gem.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

A Gem? Like a stone?

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( She leans in slightly, just enough to expose the polished Jasper on her neck, but not enough to leave herself vulnerable. )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

Oh wow! Is that a Jasper? Is it fused to your skin? ...oh wait I forgot my social skills again...I never asked your name did I?

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

I'm Jasper Facet 15P2D cut 4SV. What's your name?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The figure completely ignores your question and continues rambling.* Jasper Facet 15P2D cut 4SV that's a very long name. How about I call you Jasper for short? Oh! That's interesting the stone on your neck appears to be a Jasper and Jasper is in your name! Was that done on purpose?

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

... I'm a Jasper. ( She picks the figure up by the back of their outfit, examining them in a moonlight. ) And I suppose I'll be calling you "Defective Spy" then?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The figure seems a bit grumpy that you picked them up but their mood quickly changes when you give them a name.*

* Gasp* A Name!! I don't think I have one of those!! Thank You!!

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( Jasper's face lifts into an expression of surprise. ) Really? ( She quickly sets Spy down. ) I'm terribly sorry then. I'll just call you Spy.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

No! It's ok! I mean I kind of have a name...well this body has a name but I don't think it's my name....And I don't think I have a name...So it's ok!

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( She gazes out on the horizon. ) It's not okay. Defectives are withdrawn from their rank. Ridiculed. Shattered. To be Defective is the ultimate insult to our kind and it's not a title you should have been designated. ( Jasper sighs and runs a hand through her hair. ) Old habits die hard. Isn't that the saying here? ( She looks down at Spy, something uncharacteristic of a Jasper glinting in her eye. )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure looks back at Jasper pulling off the hat and scarf that concealed her face. She places the googles on to her head as a small, sad smile spreads across her lips.*

Yes, that is a saying here isn't it. But I think it's a saying for a reason. Old habits can keep us alive, they instill some form of order and structure in our lives, and they make us who we are and can help shape who we choose to become. ... Who do you want to become Jasper?

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( She stands still with lips barely parted- stunned by the question. )

... I...was never given a choice

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The sadness on the girl's face deepens but the smile remains. The girl sits down on the porch and looks out into the street.*

Yah...Life can be like that. Sometimes it doesn't give us a choice, sometimes it makes one for us, and sometimes when it does give us a choice and we make a decision...*the girl pauses and the smile disappears from her face*...it still won't give us what we desire most.

But-- *The girl looks back at Jasper, the smile returning to her face.*, But if you had the choice, if you could get what you desired most, what would you choose?

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

( She looks up into the sky, remembering the faces of her fallen comrades. )

Freedom.

( With a grunt, the giant carefully perches herself beside Spy. ) Where I come from, each Gem type has their own assignment. The Peridots are the technicians, the ones who fire the weapons and remodel the planets. The Pearls are the servants, ones who look the prettiest but have the least rights. Me? I'm a Quartz. We were made to fight. As a Jasper, I was made for commanding the front lines. I can't change my designation, but the least I can do is fight to make sure you never have to.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The sun begins to rise and the girl looks out into the clouds.*

Well it seems to me that you have already made your choice, and from the sound of it...your accomplishing it too.

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Not anywhere close. We've won a battle, but the war is yet to come. The only choice I've made is which side I'm on and that could ultimately cost me my life. ( She looks to the girl. ) You're human. You should probably rest.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

I may be human but I've rested and hid all day. This night I try to find my answers, this night I try to win a battle.

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

And you will win. It's just that the sun is coming up and you've been skirting around the shadows for a while. ( She rubs her chin with her hand. ) You want answers, yeah? I bet you came here for a reason so you might as well crash while you do it.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The girl looks at the rising sun, sadness entering her blue eye while her orange eye remains dead as ever almost if it was glass but it dialates to the increasing light.* I came here for a reason, yes, for help in my battle, but I think it may have been the wrong move. I think it was a mistake coming here. ...I should just go. *The girl begins to stand.*

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

( Jasper rises as well, looking down at the girl. ) I'm not sure there is anywhere else to go. This is a town run by fear and greed. If for no other reason, stay here for refuge. The scientist humans may not understand, but they will at least respect you and make sure you are in optimal condition and have enough strength to face your enemies.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Jasper Jekyll • 3 years ago

* The girl looks up at Jasper.* You're right. This place is controlled by fear and greed and I can see it in your eyes you know of war, you have seen this city's underbelly. So if you say this is a safe place then I will trust your judgement. *The girl straightens to a standing position.* But how does one even begin to seek refuge here? The paper work must be phenomenal!

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Jasper Jekyll  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

I have not seen any scientist here fill out a single form. We will be delighted to have you as you are- no hidden requirements.

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Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* elaina jerked awake, startled. She sighed, thinking that it was a dream. She laid back down, unable to fall asleep. So she got up and went to get some sugary unheathly foods, humming* hmmmm.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* When she steps out of her room she trips over a large bag laying outside her door. The bag tips over spilling small white crystals across the hall. The air now smells sweet.*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* yelps and falls flat on her face. She stands, rubbing her nose, and looks at the crystals* is that... Sugar?

(Oh God, if it is... Your oc is screwed.)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* It's sugar.*

(rofl well this will be interesting... XD )

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* elaina grinned and picked up a hand full* this will be great... On something else. Straight sugar is nasty! *giggles* I wonder if they have plantains? *grabs the back and skips to the kitchen*

(Certainly. *evil grin*)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* When Elaina bursts through the kitchen door she finds a stranger standing in the middle of it holding another very large sack. The stranger peers over the top of the sack at Elaina.* ...Crap...

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* yelps* who are you?! *frowns* I haven't met you... Just another person here I guess??? *slowly goes to the fridge, looking for fried plantains*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The stranger watches Elaina, puts the bag on the floor, sits down next to it, reaches in, pulls out a hand full of fried plantains, and then starts eating them.*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(You know what those are, right?)

* turns and gasps* can I have some?! Puh-leeeeeease???

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

(I LOVE PLANTAINS!!! I usually just eat them straight though, I'll have to try some with sugar next time I find some!)

* The figure grabs a handful and shrinks away from the bag giving you room to dive in.*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(I allllways get plantains with pupusas!!! My stepdad's mom fries them, they're SO good. They aren't fried like potato chips, just hot and a little dark)

* smiles and pulls some out of the bag, sprinkling it with a ton of sugar* mmmm...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

(LUCKY! Can I come eat at your house? My dad is allergic to plantains and banana so we never get them.)

* The figure stops eating the plantains in their hands and watches you closely*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(XD I wish. That sucks!)

So, what's your name? *a small, almost sadistic grin, that's scarily unfamiliar to her childish face, has started to spread across her face the more she ate, already eating quite a bit of the bag of sugar*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

( Yah that it's sad however it makes even more a special treat!)

* The figure pauses for a moment in shock and then begins to laugh.* I've never been asked that before!

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

You... Haven't? Why not? *the grin disappears and she stops eating, curious now*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure stops laughing and stares down at it's gloved hands.* I...I guess it's cause they all die before they can ask...*The figure opens and closes their hands a few times almost as though they were testing them to see if they still worked.* But...I guess...This body is named... *The figure hesitates for a momement and the next word that comes out of it's mouth is filled quiet emotions.* ...Allison...

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* frowns, confused* um... Okay... Allison... Where did you come from? *notices how the stranger looked kind of sad* are... You okay?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure stops moving for a few minutes and just stairs at their hands. When they finally speak again the confusion you feel fills their own voice.* ...I-I'm not sure... I was wondering if you could help me answer those questions.

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Me...? *rubs the scar on her neck nervously, not noticing as it had become a habit, and then smiles at them* sure. My name's Elaina Hyde. *holds her hand out* it's nice to meet you.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure bolts back from the hand and into a defensive sitting position. Realizing you mean no harm the figure relaxes but doesn't move towards you or your hand.* I know your name but it's... nice to finally meet you Elaina. I was wondering do you know where I could find a very special kind of salt?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Um... Okay... Maybe?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The next word out of her mouth comes as a bit of a shock. It's the name of the salt. The salt you know of and it's used for one thing and one thing alone. HJ7*

(I don't actually know the name of the salt though I did see it once get called ghost salt in a weird comic.)

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(Yeah)

* freezes* Wh... Why?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure eyes you, sighs, and reaches into it's satchel.* I- I need to make this. *The figure pulls out a old worn piece of paper, bits of it are missing and most of it is burned and covered in dirt and blood but three legible messages stands out. At the top in neat hand writing is written 'A New Start for a New World'. Over top of the entire page is written in blotted hurried ink 'NEVER TO BE USED UNLESS YOU WISH TO PROVOKE EVIL HIMSELF!' and underneath all of that is scrawled 'HJ7'*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

How... How did you get that?! I thought Helen had the only recipe! This... That... That's impossible...!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure almost jumps on top of Elaina in excitement but instead lands mere inches away. Desperation fills it's voice when they speak.* Wait you know what this is?!? CAN YOU TELL ME WHAT IT DOES!?!

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* yelps* yes! It makes an alter ego!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure sit's back confused and thinks about what it just learned.* It makes another person?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Yes. An alter ego, inside of you. A few people have one, like Dr. Fail- er, Helen Jekyll.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

Inside of you...where does the original person go?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

They're still there.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure's breath catches.* How do they come back?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

They just switch back and forth?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

They do? How?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

I... Don't know. Magic! Science!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure sits back in disappointment and sadness.* What... What if Sh-they don't come back?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Um... That won't happen...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* She perks up at this.* That's good. *She eats a plantain chip before continuing.* So do you know where I can find that salt?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Helen has some...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

Can we get it?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Probably.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure jumps to her feet excitement filling her voice!* Great! Let's go!

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Oh, but... Helen's out. Can you wait, or...?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

I-I would like to get it now.

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Oh... Okay, I'll try...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

Thank you.

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

I don't know if... It's in her house, or her room here...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

Well we can check both.

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

I guess...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

Ok! Let's Go! *Excitedly walks to the door and then stops waiting for you to follow.*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* follows her, looking back longingly at the sugar*

(She never got the sugar problem...)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* looks back at Elaina* Lead the-- *The figure sees Elaina looking longingly at the sugar. They reach into their satchel and pull out a small bag and hands it to her.* This might help you lead better...

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* giggles and takes it, leading*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* Follows excitedly after Elaina as they travel the halls to Helen's office.* (Do you want to do a story cut and say they made it to Helen's office or do you want to have our characters talk about anything as they walk?)

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(Story cut is fine)

* Elaina opened the door to her room* I think... I saw...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure waits patiently outside.*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* goes to Helen's bookshelf* I watched her one time, it was one of there books. Come on, come help!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure walks into Helen's room taking it in and observing every corner. The figure then reaches into their satchel and pulls out four large cans and sets them on the floor for to stand on.* (I'm assuming we're looking up in the higher selves)

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(Nope. Helen said in a book.)

Hey, Helen got it from one of these books... Try looking on the book shelf!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure picks the cans back up and puts them into their satchel. The satchel shows no sign of holding 4 very large cans. The figure, then walks over to the selves and starts pulling off books and opening them.* How do we know which one is the right one?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Look... *opens a book called crime and punishment* found it!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure puts the book in their hands back and jogs over to Elaina.* M-May I have it?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Yeah, sure. It's the whole serum right here.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure rips off their scarf, grabs the serum, and drinks it in one fell swoop.*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

NONONONO WAIT!!!! *takes it before she can drink it* we didn't add the salt!!!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure blushes (You can see their cheeks now.)* Oh right sorry. *Pulls out the salt and the recipe and pours in the required amount.* Am I forgetting anything else?

(That was great not expecting that at all! XD )

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

That could've been so bad. Who knows what would've happened... You can drink it now.

(Dingus.)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure drinks the potion ...and nothing happens...a minute goes by then two and still nothing.* When is it supposed to start taking effect?

(Yah I deserve that. lol)

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

It should take affect almost immediately after you drink it...?

(😆)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure grows red with rage.* IT DIDN'T WORK!!! WHY DIDN'T IT WORK! *The figure chucks their top hat and then their goggles at the floor. You can now see them properly and tell that they are a girl. The girl has long dirty blond hair with a few streaks of blond and brown running throughout. Her hair is kept back in a pony tail and matted with blood and dirt, though there are many shorter strands that hang wildly in front. She has a thin build and something about her seems deformed though it's impossible to tell what. The eyes however are the most striking of all. The left eye is burnt orange and appears to be dead. One may even make the mistake of thinking it was glass due to the lack of life behind it but the pupal dilates. The right is a bright shocking blue that seems to hold great terror and at the moment great anger behind it.* IT SHOULD HAVE WORKED!! *The figure then rips off her satchel and also throws that against a wall with great force. After a second she realizes what she's done and quickly rushes over to the satchel picking it up and cradling it in her arms, her back facing you. You hear small silent sobs and whispering now coming from her.* It should have worked...why didn't it...

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* backs up* um... I'm sorry... Are you ok...?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The girl doesn't turn around.* ...No... I'm not ok...She's not ok...and I don't know why or how or--or anything!

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Hey, hey, it's okay! Don't freak out. I'm going to help you! I'm going to help you figure out everything, okay? Please don't cry... *hugs her*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The girl looks up at her tears streaming from her blue eye. Her orange eye shows nothing.* I-*sniff* I need to find her. C-Can you help me find her?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Find who, Allison?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure nods her head solemnly, pulls out a picture frame, and hands it to you.* Have you seen her? *In the frame is a picture of girl in a simple dress with long, straight, light blond hair. She has Orange, caring eyes and a sweet smile. She seems to resemble the girl next to you almost as if they could be sisters.*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

She almost looks... Like you?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The girl's blue eye starts pouring tears again and silent sobs rack her body.*

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

What? Are you sisters? Are you sure you aren't that girl...?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

T-That's the problem! I-I don't know! I-I don't think I'm her b-b-but then who am I? Where is s-she? And-And why w-won't she come b-back?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

I don't know...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

...Neither do I...

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

I'm so sorry...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

It's not your fault. A-And it's not mine...And it's not h-hers...*Her voice drops to a whisper* Its-Its....Theirs.

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Who's?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The girl whispers* The Silver Feather Men.

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

What?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

T-They come at sunset...I-Its their fault...T-They did something t-to her...T-They tried to kill her...I-Its their fault...their fault she's missing...

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Oh...?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

...I-I mean Its gotta be their fault ....after what they did...right?

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Yeah, but... Who are they?

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure grows quite for a few minutes and then replys.* ...I ....I don't know....

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Oh... Okay, that's okay.

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

No It's Not!

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

We can figure it out!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

I've been trying to figure it out for 3--no today marks 4 years! And nothing! No sign that she's dead and no sign she's alive, just Nothing!

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

I'm sorry...

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

* The figure grows quite the anger draining away.* ...Maybe you'll see something I haven't...maybe you'll find her.

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Elaina Hyde  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Maybe!

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Catt Hatter  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

(Unless Hela got rid of it, there should be some vials of HJ7 in the one wardrobe in Helen's room.) *The narrator disappears after sharing the information.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

(Thank you fellow narrator! X3 )

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(Ya walcome! X3 )

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Elaina Hyde  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

(Um, can Elaina.... See you?)

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Catt Hatter  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

(I don't have a physical body as the Narrator, so no. But it's entirely up to you whether she can hear me or not. The general idea is that most characters can't, but whatevs. Catt and Mz. Hyde are the only ones who can hear me all the time and they bonded over this discovery a while back.)

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Elaina Hyde  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

(Oh, alrighty then.)

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Helen Jekyll  Elaina Hyde • 3 years ago

(Try the inside of "Crime and Punishment" on her bookshelf. It's hollow and contains the salt along with a bit of the serum that just needs salt added.)

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Elaina Hyde  Helen Jekyll • 3 years ago

(Oh, handy. XD "Crime and Punishment"?)

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Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

(Sorry I'm late to the party! I somehow missed this discussion completely. >.<; )

* Catt was sound asleep in the basement room she shared with her debtor Sozo. She wasn't stirred by the pounding on the front door. Such a cursedly deep asleep, with only the nightmare for company.

However Sozo, whose turn it was on the floor, woke at the final slam. He looked around, and seeing nothing unusual in the darkened room, decided to investigate the source. He moved quietly up the stairs and hugging the shadows cast by silver moonlight, crept across the main hall towards the doors.

Ugh, he thought. This lighting's already giving me a headache.

He closed his brown right eye and let the other take over.

That's better. He looked around the room, searching for any sign of disturbance he sniffed at the still air.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

(Don't worry about it! There's been so many new Discussions popping up this week it's easy to miss one!)

* The room doesn't seemed to be disturbed but as Sozo already noticed there is a lack of man made light that usually floods into the room through the windows. The air has a faint order to it. This smell is one Sozo has encountered before though he has never found its source.*

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

You again. *He muttered, tilting his head to have a better listen for the probable intruder. He held his breath and sat so still that, if he hadn't just spoken, someone would've mistaken him for a statue.

He waited for his opponent to make a move.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

* While Sozo waits he hears the wind blow through the trees outside, the steady hum of a machine in one of the labs, and whispering coming from outside.*

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* He silently moved across the hall to one of the front windows, the sound of his bare feet on the floor masked by the breeze outside. He stopped to listen again just below the windowsill.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

* Now closer to the window he can hear the whispering clearer.* ...sorry...I tried...come back...I'm sorry...this was a mistake... so sorry...

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

* Who's she whispering to? Sozo wondered, carefully peering over the window ledge.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago • edited

* As Sozo peers out the window he sees a figure curled up behind one of the far pillars clutching something to their chest. The figure continued to whisper to...no one.* (If you want more of a description of the figure I can add it to this comment but most of it has already been said in the other RPs)

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

* Great, another one. He thought, rolling his eyes. He stood and opened the door.*

You can come in now, might as well get it over with. *He said walking over to the pillar in question.*

(I'm good thanks! I've read them already. :3 )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

* The figure doesn't seem to notice Sozo.*

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

* He frowns and leans over her shoulder.*

Hey, I'm talking to you!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

* The figure looks up.* AGH! *They quickly tries to tuck away what every they were holding back into their satchel*

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

'Augh' yourself. You gonna come in or what? I wanna get back to sleep. *Sozo grumbled. Whoever this girl was, and why ever she was here, it was too late at night for dealing with new crazy scientists. He'd rather be sleeping through the night hours uninterrupted.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

* The figure stares at Sozo unsure of what to do.*

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

Hello? Is anybody in there? *He said, leaning over and tapping the girl's forehead.* I said come inside!

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago • edited

* As soon as you touch the figure they jump to their feet and whip out a blood stained kitchen knife.* How do I know I can trust you?

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

* Quick as a flash the figure found themselves on their back, the knife gone from her hand and a foot holding her down.*

I don't care if you trust me or not, but picking a fight with an elite warrior is dumb. If I wanted you dead, I wouldn't have bothered inviting you in. Now you gonna behave and come inside, or are we just gonna stay out here until someone sees us? *He asked crossly, the girl's knife held out of reach in his right hand.*

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago • edited

* When the figure is knocked on to her back her top hat and goggles fall off and her scarf is pulled down around her neck. Her long hair is dirty blond with strange wild shorter strains framing her face. The figure with eyes closed struggles for a minute opening and closing their hands. The figure then stops and opens her mismatched eyes. The left eye is burnt orange and appears to be dead but the pupal dilates. The right is a bright shocking blue that seems to hold great terror. Looking into that blue eye something deep inside Sozo mind is struck. A new feeling fills his being, something primal, something that only prey should feel. What was it? Uncertainty, fear, guilt? The figure under his foot begins to smile.*

...'Someone sees us?' Oh! This is fun! They usually never fight back! Normally they beg for mercy and sometimes I give it to them but sometimes...oh sometimes I don't. Sometimes I keep them alive for days just on the verge of passing out from the pain, begging for death. But enough about me. Let's talk about you Sozo.

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

* Great, she's some kind of mentally warped Seer. He thought crossly. Meeting their blue eye's gaze, he recognised a predator's menacing, hungry glare. If he dropped his guard, this could end very badly for him.*

I'm not the intruder here. You answer my questions, got it? *He growled, holding the knife threateningly against her neck.*

Who are you and what are you doing here? *He demanded, leaning heavily on the leg that held her down. His red eye glinted in the near blackness, as if dimly lit from within.*

(I think you meant 'strands' instead of 'strains' and, Sozo isn't wearing boots. He's barefoot. ^-^; heh...)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago • edited

* The figured continue smiling. Her hair seemed to be darker than before and the wild strands around her face seemed more prominent, or had it always been like that?* Ooo resorting to threats, Sozo? Trying to keep the upper hand, Sozo? But I would like to make one thing straight first before you start bringing blood forth from my neck. I was not intruding, I was not in the building. I was merely enjoying the night air on your lovely porch. But I think the real question is: What are you doing here? *The feelings seem to grow in intensity.* So far away from home aren't you? Tell me, are you lonely here?

(NO!! Computer Why didn't you catch these things?!? Sorry about the boot though I one was my fault. I'm going to go fix that. :P )

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

* Sozo waited patiently for the woman to finish her speech with a rather bored look on his face.*

Are you trying to impress me with how many times you can say my name? You've been lingering around the Society for a long time, of course you would've heard of me. No, I'm not lonely. And for another thing, *He paused, suddenly driving the knife through his captive's forearm, pinning it to the porch.* I have the upper hand, and I don't make threats. *He snarled, mis-matched eyes boring sharply into his opponent's, shifting the predator against prey stance to one of predator against predator.*

('Strains' again, and 'prominent' I'm not sure what 'prominate' is. :/ Also, 'had' would work better than 'has' in that sentence. Spelcheck needs an upgrade. Please tell me if this gets annoying, and I'll stop.)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago • edited

* The girl doesn't even flinch as the knife goes into her arm. She glances down at it slightly disappointed and then looks back up at sozo.*

Great! Now I've got to patch up my suit again! *She looks down at the wound now as the fabric begins soaking up her blood.* And now I'm going to need to wash it! *sigh*

As for me saying your name I like saying it! It's unusual and really rolls of one's tongue. *The figure moves her arms and body slightly, opening and closing her hands as though trying to get comfortable. The sense of fear once again seems to be building up inside Sozo.* Also I'm glad to see that you don't go back on your word though I was expecting more of a gash in my neck than a knife through my arm. But I'll take the change. It makes things more interesting! Speaking of interesting I think it's adorable how you believe you have the upper hand. *The grin on her face widens.*

(I think I killed my spell check again...*sighs* Thank you for helping I do really appreciate it! If I'm not careful, my writing would just be a string of random letter with spaces between them so I do really like you helping me make my writing more understandable!)

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

If a gash to the neck wouldn't be as lethal as it is to most people, I'd be more than happy to oblige!

* He snapped in her face. His hand holding the knife, which was still lodged in the floorboards through her arm. She's completely mental. This is getting annoying, and boring. I wanna go back to bed... Sozo thought, Hang on, was she flirting with me?*

Besides, if I'd cut your neck right away you wouldn't be able to answer my questions.

(Rest in peace Spellcheck. Commas are your friend, think of them the way slight pauses happen in casual conversation! Also, 'sense of fear' not 'since.' I'm happy to help in any way I can! I've had some people who didn't like my help, so I make overly-certain that it's wanted. Sorry! )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago • edited

I mean if you want, your welcome to but, just keep in mind that I will scream. And when I scream everyone will come running, and then they will see this spectacle. The Dangerous Sozo standing over an unarmed girl covered in blood, knife in hand looking to quench his thirst for violence and death. Now normally this wouldn't be a problem for many of the members in the society since they have credibility but you, Sozo, don't! Cattmight defend you but even so everyone in that building will constantly watching your every move, always nervous, always scared. And fear, fear my dear Sozo can show a person's true colors. *The girl adjusts tilting her head leaving her neck exposed. The feelings of fear, guilt, and uncertainty intensify in him.*

(AGH!!! >///< NO--wait hold on is my character flirting? D: Problems of an Ace/Aro!

Also the neck would be just as lethal unless it's just a scratch.

Yah I do try using commas but somehow it's wrong and well...let's just say English is not my strong suit. I do very much appreciate the help though and I can understand how some people may not like it but I need all the help I can get! XD)

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

They already watch my every move, why do you think I don't come out much? And, *He said. Releasing his grip on the knife, he left it wedged in the wood of the porch and dragged a fingernail lazily across her exposed neck.* Unless you can scream louder than you were banging on the doors, I doubt anyone would notice. *Finishing the gesture, he crossed his arms over the leg that held the girl down and leaned on them. The extra weight made it more difficult for her to breathe, but not impossible.*

But let's say they did. They would come down, and see an empty doorstep on a darkened street. Scratch their heads in confusion, and go back to bed.

* Something I'd like to be doing myself. Hurry up and cave, would ya? He thought grouchily. As much as he enjoyed a contest, this one wasn't the type you were meant to enjoy.

It was the type you were meant to survive.*

(Sassy and clever bravado-talk can be mistaken for flirting. At this point Sozo is just keeping up the push for push fight for attitudinal dominance.

Noted. Though I'm curious as to why she didn't feel pain from the knife going straight through her arm and being embedded in the floorboards. What's up with that?

Think of where you just used "...", that's the exact place you would use a comma. :) Hang on, is English not your first language?)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago • edited

* The figure begins to laugh, though it is stifled slightly by Sozo's foot. All hostility leaves her face and replaced by joy.* You're impressive! Most people wouldn't have lasted as you have! Now if you could help me up, I would like to sew up my arm before I loose any more blood and you loose much more sleep.

(It's all good. I'll have my character explain her intentions and things here in a moment as well as some other of the odd details. As for flirting, If you think it's a good idea, this could become a thing with her around Sozo but I'm not any good when it comes to determining love stories and stuff so I'm leaving that call up to you.

Well I think I can explain most of that now since certain key points in her backstory have been revealed. The fact that she didn't feel the pain is because of a couple things. One, my character is in constant emotional pain [due to reasons that are coming, I think, in Elaina's story line with her] so the physical pain of a knife going through her arm is a minor nuance. Two, if you we're to remove her suit coat and roll up her sleeves you would see her body covered in scars and burns [most of her nerve endings were burned off and haven't properly grown back.] Finally, her current...mood is not one that really notices the pain [more on this later.].

I'll try doing that! Thank you! For some reason though when ever I use quotation marks it comes up as spam, that's why I usually use the apostrophe instead. English is my first language but I'm so bad at English, it may not seem like my first language. I'm much more of a math, science, and building person than a English, writing, and drawing person. :P )

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago • edited

* Sozo had a vexed glare frozen on his face. A stupefied silence dragged on for a time that felt much longer than it actually was.*

... What? *He eventually said, not moving. In this dance of insanity and bravado, he had finally missed a step and was at a loss for words. One minute they were fighting for dominance, the next she's treating it like she just won the grand prize, and he had no idea what to make of it.*

(Cool, can't wait to read it! Flirting/not covered in the other discussion.

[I've gotta go read that conversation.] The poor girl! :( It sounds like she's been through heck! [Ok, I'll wait! :3]

Ah, that's an odd thing to have triggering the spam filter. I wonder what's up with that? Using apostrophe instead works though, so you're good.

No, that's not what I meant! DX AAHH! Your English is fine! I was just thinking the way you phrased your previous remark, it sounded like... urgh. >///<

The best thing I can recommend for improving a general understanding of English [and language in general] is to read a lot. Like, read books that have you bringing a dictionary along for the ride. The Chronicles of Narnia is a good series, so is The Hobbit and Lord of the Rings. If you're looking for a sassy narrator The Hitch-Hiker's Guide to the Galaxy series is a good one. [There I go adding to your summer reading list again. xp] Math, science and construction? Cool! Those were some of my favourite classes back in highschool. :3 )

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

Hello? Is anybody in there? *The girl said throwing Sozo's words right back at him.* My blood is currently staining the front porch of the society, which will not be a pretty sight in the morning. Now if you wouldn't mind removing your foot I would like to get some supplies out of my bag. I'm also going to need your help removing the knife and keeping pressure on my arm while I sew it up.That is if you don't want the stain to become much larger. *The girl was right. A pool of blood was growing around her arm and seeping into the stone that made up the floor of the Society's front enterance.*

(Yah it's weird and I'm not sure why its doing that.

Oh don't worry about it! My English is so bad at times one can hardly think it's even English.

I have read Hitch Hikers guide to the galaxy which was very enjoyable, though most of what I read today are comics, scientific journal atricles, and 1800s literature. I'll have to check out those other books you recommended though! [No complaints here! X3 ]

But yah I'm a very STEM person.)

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

Uh, yeah... Right! *He said, removing his foot and quickly stepping back. With the threatening atmosphere now dispersed, Sozo realised what he'd done.*

We should totally get something on that. There's some meds and stuff in the infirmary. That is, if you're actually going to come inside now? *As if the situation wasn't strange enough, he found that the scent of her blood drifting through the chill night air was beginning to give him a headache.*

(Computers man, they're weird.

x~x Still, sorry!

Have you read the rest of the "trilogy told in five parts?" X3 Those sound interesting, could you recommend some?

What's STEM? )

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(Also, you've got some repeating words in Allison's dialogue. "Most people would have wouldn't have lasted as long as you have!" Nice use of the commas by the way!)

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Hyde without a Jekyll  Catt Hatter • 3 years ago

(Thank you! I've been trying some of your suggestions. Also I just fixed that bit, thanks for pointing that out! :D )

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Catt Hatter  Hyde without a Jekyll • 3 years ago

(No problem! :3 I love helping out!)

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