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Look what my Daughter Wrote!

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Tulioh Santos

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@pinkamenadianepiejekyll 3 years ago

Again, This is wrote by MY DAUGHTER! not me! (It's about me though so yeah!)

The Doctor paced back and forth in her room. Back and forth, back and forth. Her mind raced with flooded thoughts. What was she going to do? What if her friends found out? She didn't want them to worry about her. Not now, not ever. She collapsed, overwhelmed from being told of her future. Her life was suddenly shortened right before her very eyes. The document fluttered down slowly to the floor. The words printed on the page seemed to fly off. They read: 'Pinkamena Jekyll has been diagnosed with Brain Cancer.' She pulled herself to the window of her canterlot room. Grimly she watched from her office. She felt defeated. She felt hopeless. There was a silence, and a long one at that. Then, after a what seemed like a mere moment, there was a heavy knock on the door. A pause, then a voice.

''Dr. Jekyll? You've been in there for three hours straight! You okay?'' The voice was familiar to the pink pony. She took a second to think of what words to spill from her mouth.

''Yes, I-i'm fine. I just,'' She paused. I'll be out in a few minutes... A faint trace of depression was in her voice.

''Okay! I'll be waiting! We still need to discuss what we're going to do for the convention!'' The familiar voice was her and old college friend, and partner in planning events. His name, was Thunderlane Lanyon. She yanked herself away from the window. Dragging her hooves to the door. Not before she fixed her collar up high. Patting off her coat. She put her hoof the the door, and opened it slowly. Her blue eyes darted about. He wasn't in sight. She made her way down the hall. The weight of reality weighed down her back. She trudged down the stairs, and into the main tea room. Waiting for her was Thunderlane. He flagged her down, waving his hoof to and fro th in the air. A big grin on his face. She tried to bring herself to do the same, but all that showed up was a weak looking smile.

''Ah! Pinkie! There you are! Now, let's get to business. I was thinking, we could put up a banner on the front of the society. What do you think Miss Jekyll?'' She took a seat and nodded slowly.

''Every other year we have done this, we never put a banner! I think we should this year to grab the attention of others!'' Pinkie nodded again

''What about the flyers? Are you going to do them and me the banner? or the opposite?'' Pinkie placed her hoof on the table. Thunderlane mumbled. Something she couldn' t make out.

''Yeah, I think you should do the banner! You're much more creative than me Pinkie.'' He chuckled. She once again nodded.

(She has yet to write more, This is only chapter one!)

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Dr. Jekyll II ( Mother Hen ) • 3 years ago

( muttering softly, his musical voice lowered to a gentle hum ) my gracious, brain cancer of all beasts. Given the diagnosis, I would assume that it's some form of late stage metastatic growth or Astrocytoma ( he hangs onto the last word with a pained pause)

...and I can only tell you how sorry I am. ( his warm brown eyes brim with concern, tinged with something nearly undetectable yet oddly familiar ) Should you need a friend, I will always be available. Don't go through this alone. ( his tone changes, becoming suddenly merry )

On a brighter note, your daughter is indeed a fantastic writer. Her use of language held me captive the entire time and I will be looking forward to every subsequent update!

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Emmarayn Redding • 3 years ago

Give your daughter my compliments! She's done good work. :D

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Tulioh Santos  Emmarayn Redding • 3 years ago

Thank you kindly! She thinks that others don't like her works! I think they are outstanding!

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Emmarayn Redding  Tulioh Santos • 3 years ago

Well, let her know that at least one person outside of the family does. As she continues to write and expand her experience, she'll only get better. ^_^

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Tulioh Santos  Emmarayn Redding • 3 years ago

She's actualy hovering over my pc as we speak, She's such an easedropper.

She's making an excited noise, I think that means she's happy!

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Emmarayn Redding  Tulioh Santos • 3 years ago

Aw, how sweet! XD

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Mz.Hyde Mod • 3 years ago

I don't know if I should be excited for the next chapter or cry because one of my favorite ponies has brain cancer! GUYS HELP ME I'M CONFLICTED!!

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Tulioh Santos  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

DONT WORRY! I'm not dead now arnt I? So guess who survives?

(I asked her she said I don't die X3)

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Tulioh Santos • 3 years ago

YAY! PINKIE PIE ISN'T GOING TO DIE FROM BRAIN CANCER! * Hugs the pink pony*

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Tulioh Santos  Mz.Hyde • 3 years ago

Uhh Okie okie... X3 Personal space?

Nah nvm hug me OwO

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Tulioh Santos • 3 years ago

My daughter also is working on this story. It does take place in a victorian style london. She's putting her hear and soul into it! I enjoy reading it! Possibly you guys will too?

https://www.wattpad.com/sto...

https://disq.us/url?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.wattpad.com%2Fstory%2F59044992-the-murders-of-galloway-hall%3A2INb7exPemDZs0CdLxV1jCx_wI4&cuid=4046483

Here's the link!

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Tulioh Santos • 3 years ago

SHould I post her second chapter? She updated it just a few minutes back.

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Tulioh Santos • 3 years ago

DO IT!!

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