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@AnaSofia16 a year ago

Hi guys ...today i posted my very first fanfiction on A03 ; i made the first chapter funny enough i have written on paper until chapter 7 ) is my very first fic ...so it might not be the best but i tried ( i love fanfiction =D) soo..yeah if you read it ...i hope you like it (i cant seem to find a link ; so if you like to read it ; you can go to the Tgs tag or just search for me (HJ7- a Reason to believe ) im sorry ...

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Mz.Hyde Mod • a year ago

I really like the idea and I left a kudos on it! However I do have a few constructive criticisms about it if you would like to hear it.

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Writer_of HJ7  Mz.Hyde • a year ago

Its fine with me ...its a first fic after all ...id love to hear what you have to say

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Mz.Hyde Mod  Writer_of HJ7 • a year ago • edited

Cool!

Ok. first things first: kill the blob. Now, what blob am I talking about? I mean the giant blob of text that has eaten your story. Readers often get turned off by seeing a huge blob of text, it makes it look like:

fdsahfdbsnjhbdjbgfadbafjdhfbhsdajfbdshfhadbsjbfdshbfbhdshbfhdsafjsdhbfhdbsfjhdsfhsdahbbfhbfhbfhbfdshfbajhdsbfdshfbasjfdbhdshbfhdsjabhfbsdbfhdsjhbfdfjh

And your readers are like: @-@

Try separating your story into certain sections. One way to do this is separating it by whomever is talking, for example:

"I'm Edward Hyde and I hate bananas!" Said Hyde. "Ahaha! Engard!" Lanyon screamed as he chased Hyde with a banana in his hand.

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"I'm Edward Hyde and I hate bananas!" Said Hyde.

"Ahaha! Engard!" Lanyon screamed as he chased Hyde with a banana in his hand.

Now, it doesn't look like a big deal in a short example, but in a big story it really helps readers focus.

You can also mark when someone speaks by using the " " marks. Just put them at the beginning and the end of the spoken words.

To help with things like grammar and spelling and punctuation, I really recommend getting someone to read your story, whether it be a beta reader, a spell-check program on wherever you write things on a computer, or a software like Grammerly (I use this all the time, and its free!).

That's about it! Thanks for listening!

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Writer_of HJ7  Mz.Hyde • a year ago

Thanks ...i will try to do that when i update again ...it was helpfull=D

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