Board Thread:Fan Art/@comment-29660088-20160818204036

Place for discussing stuff about the project to draw Hyde without a Jekyll's story...

HJ, I noticed a few things in Act 1. (Act 2's settings are all so weird and wonderful that you can't really get anything "wrong"!) First - 19th-century police didn't have guns; that's kind of unavoidable because it was the whole reason the police force was set up. Easily solved, it can just be that they called in the army as backup because they'd heard all the stories about the Society. (They did do that when necessary, I remember a bit about that in Pickwick Papers.)  And tonight, for the first time, they're perfectly right... I suppose that also means you need to either cut "or I'll kill you myself!" or have him snatch a gun from the soldier next to him.

Need to make it clear that they've already refused to give up Hyde, it wouldn't make sense for him to just arrive and arrest them all for the murderer being in their house. By the way, is the commissioner's spiel right, "By the order of Queen Victoria," etc.? It would be fun for it to be right, it's so historical-sounding. Don't know offhand where to look that up though.

It's Prussic acid that famously smells of almonds, you tiny fool; I don't think arsenic has a smell. Could just say poison.

Don't forget about Jasper's accent when he talks to Henry.

(It might have changed by Act 2, though, when he's spent a year mixing with all these different people and apparently taking over the post of front-man.

How's that for irony? Henry tries to save the society's reputation by leaving so he can be replaced by... a werewolf. Who appears to have managed OK. Henry, you are a fool sometimes.)

Cheers! 